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And then they went boom! So I thought I'd try adding some clouds n stuff. Think this turned out quite decent, but I definetly need to practise more :p

Any critique would be appreciated :)

Most of the clouds are from photo's I took myself (holiday pictures, you know :p ) and some are from sxc.hu

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It's pretty good. It would be a lot better if I couldn't see hard lines where the edge of the clouds are sometimes. The clouds should be blended a bit better at the seams.
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~Koepaard Jan 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ok, thanks :)
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~gusak22 Jan 15, 2009   Interface Designer
Makes me think of fantastic 4 rise of the silver surfer. I love the whole thing, it just seems to lack some stars.
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~Koepaard Jan 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, thanks man! :D
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:icondaviper1:
Just found this too that might interest you about the stars...[link] didn't try it yet but result looks really decent :)
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~Koepaard Jan 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, I really needed some more different views on how to make stars! ;)

thanks for helping me out once again :p
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:icondaviper1:
Oh and maybe add this little something to some stars...they all look like dots atm . [link] this guy does a lot of good stuff in space art if you need references. You could really have a lot of faves from this one for sure if you would work more on it ...but afterall that's just my opinion ! ^^ Hope i didn't critisize too much ... =/
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~Koepaard Jan 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
it's ok, gives me something for my next pieces, maybe I'll work some more on this when I get better at these space things :p

The stuff you want me to add in seems a bit advanced... I'll make sure to give it a try tho! :)

Thanks for helping, very much appreciated :D
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:icondaviper1:
space isn't so hard to do ...=) Practice is the key ! hehe. No problem for trying my best to help ! :)
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~Koepaard Jan 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ok, edited it now, what you think? )
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